Dargquon Ql'deleodna

this is good, i agree with sponson, another thing is that the jaw seems a bit mishapen. but overall this is pretty good job, and it reminds me again how ...

hey tony, whats up, welcome to the yws this place is really really really cool. if you have any questions you can ask me or probably anyother member of the ...

Beowulf stared blankly at the open sea as he sailed with his crew towards the island were the attacks had begun; it was said to be some strange monster that ...

dude, this get better and better, keep it going. it really really is good.

"yea we killed quite a few, i am not really sure i lost count around 10 in the first few minutes before he blasted us with a fireball, luckily im ...

"nope.... of course, all we did was fight off a large scouting party of dwarves, i mean i fought them off, while the elf just shot some arrows in and ...

cool wings, they just look a tad bit huge... i like wings drawn like that, im just not really good at it. i need to work on them *goes off ...

nice little short poem, the first two lines rhymed, but the other two don't rhyme much... but its pretty good, no grammer or spelling mistakes. Clear and concise.

Chapter 1 What if I told you that I didn't love you anymore? asked the girl questioningly, while a genuine curiosity in her delicate but firey (FIERY) brown eyes. That ...

its ok jack, those things happen, at least we werent to far into it.

gasping for breath i managed to say a few words as my windpipe was being slowly crushed "thaden... lireal... forest... shot down....." then trying to get away from seraph i ...

when i walked outside i first saw them flying lireal obviously enjoying it, then i saw a small red splat on the griffins wing. then they crashed into the forest. ...

"i am afraid that i cannot let you kill him, his is important for reasons; oh and elf i don't drink the blood of my kin, when i can help ...

"first of all my name is Gonrayd, second....but before I tell you, you must promise not to react in any way?" "ok, fine; now what is it" he questioned me ...

ah, i see, and now that sira is away, there is again the possibility of her being captured, that could make you even more angry, should i pm you my ...